I asked a few of my friends at Sixth Form to comment on what they liked, and what they thought could be different about my Front Page.
I began with asking Hayden.
Hayden: "I think the background worked really well, but i don't like the yellow text; it doesn't really work. The image is good, but i think that the band members should be brought foward more; closer to the camera. The text at the bottom left isn't very readable, as goes the advertisment. Other than that it looks good.
I took into account the points Hayden mentioned, then i aske Jenny.
Jenny: I really like the colours; they fit really well together. As for the advertisment, it isn't very readable. It's still a good page though!
After asking Jenny, i decided to ask Emily.
Emily: Very well laid out I think it’s absolutely brilliant! I think the blue and yellow go very well together.
After reading they're comments, i understood a few mistakes i perhaps made; Advertsiment placement, and some colour arrangements.
With these, i can edit the Front Page to improve its appearance.
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